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The Shadow

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The Shadow

Once upon the day setting, while I sat, in thought and writing
many a long and descriptive word,
As I wrote, rapidly rhyming, at once there came a sound,
as if one were trying to tell me, tell me by my window pane.
"'Tis by my dreams," I thought, "that someone speaks by my window.
Only that, and nothing else."

I could quite easily describe to you the day
when the children did play.
Greatly do I wish to forget- gravely did I try to set
from my mind that bet- bet I for revenge against she,
she who the demons did send to me:
Nothing to anyone else but me.

The quickened quiet, but noticeable, whisper of the glass
startled me- shook me with a fear unexplainable,
so that I now, along with the hearth fire crackle, prayed:
"'Tis but by my dreams that someone speaks by my window,
some strange illusion that has someone speaking by my window!
Let it be only that- and nothing else!"

And by each moment did I grow more afraid, shaking more all the longer
that there I did sit. Now truly was I somber
of the sound of soft speaking, that my breath was barely breathing-
and great was my fear. Here did I move close to the pane,
and saw the outline of a self:
only that and nothing else.

For a long time did I stand frozen, full of horror, in such a pose
of "who could it be, being sat by the window pane?"
But the silence was broken, that one word spoken: "she?"
And I, in terror, whispered back: "she."
Such was that and nothing else.

Then I, unable to take anymore, flung open the window door,
and was there a shadow like the stories of old,
not to do anything odd- or untold- but whisper:
"She and nothing else!"

Now I, feeling quite mad, when such spoke,
screamed loudly with a voice broke:
"Leave me, you who comes by she!
She's not here, done by my hand!
Her blood spilt by me, understand?"
I said this, and nothing else.

And always after did that shadow stay,
guilting me with its faceless presence.
It would not go away, that shadow,
giving me a chill quite unpleasant.
It reminded me of she, who died in a fit of agony.
From that night on I thought
of that- and nothing else...
The following poem took me over an hour to an hour and a half (twice to three times as usual) due to me trying to imitate the style of "The Raven" as closely as possible- while trying to make it make sense. It was also longer in time because the length of this was twice as long as my other poems. I also had to use even more time because I had to edit grammatical mistakes, and such, since my typewriter does not automatically do so.

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Again, I TAKE NO CREDIT FOR THIS STYLE. IT IS SIMPLY AN IMITATION OF "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe. I wanted to do a poem like it because I liked it so much.

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 I hope you enjoy it! 
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I love that this was intentionally inspired by "The Raven," because that vibe hit me with enormous force from the very first line -- an unparalleled success!!  Fantastic work!  :highfive: